Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Blog Stage 6

Constructive and reasoned criticism or commentary on Our Government Needs Gun Control 
https://whatmakesyoupoli-tick.blogspot.com/2018/11/our-government-needs-gun-control.html


While reading your blog, I could sense your strong and passionate stance on gun control. You were clear on your views and backed up your arguments with a few events and statistics.  You also gave insight on how gun control laws have worked in other countries and how we could adopt some form of their plans, which I felt was informative. I think links to the sources of your information could help strengthen your argument even more. I also think adding a few of your own ideas on how you would make gun control work could also make your stance more powerful.

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